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Feb 2015

Chapter 5: Page 22 – He’s Awake

Posted by / in Comic / 37 comments

And thus ends Chapter 5.  Any predictions on how Chapter 6 will go down? ;)

Next week I’ll post the Chapter 6 cover, along with some other fun bonus content throughout the week, like the interviews and reviews you can find in the blog.  Also some spec sheets and goodies like what you normally find on our Patreon page ;)

  • I shouldn’t be the one saying it.. but chapter 6 is awesome :D

    • Adriano

      Well, you have the chance to discover it before everybody xD

    • Delta-v

      It isn’t bragging if everyone else agrees. :)

  • I KNEW THE DIALOGUE WAS DIFFERENT DAN. You can’t fool me!
    Poor Tenzin. Poor Jane. Is anyone ever going to be happy in this story?

    • For those not in the know, I made this for @disqus_C83JXH02Hq:disqus, since she likes that sort of thing ;)

      And yes, people will eventually be happy. Probably. Maybe not everyone, but some people will be happy :)

      • There’s many reasons why I could never be an artist for this comic. Panels like this would skyrocket your rating straight into nsfw.

        • As is or the way you would draw it? ;)

          • you know damn right well this would have 42% more full frontal in it

          • Matt [in Middletown]

            Only 42% more?
            I’m wondering what the rest of the percentage breakdown would be.

        • But it would have a perfect structure

        • Matt [in Middletown]

          *Groan*
          Song stuck in my head because of this.
          “Giiiirl, lookit that body! Giiiirl lookit that body!”

    • spoiler alert!

      • Matt [in Middletown]

        “Honest, I am not Deathbot, I am Secretarybot. See my smile?”

  • Adriano

    “Wait just a second, what is that ?
    No. It couldn’t be.
    Oh my God. I’m back. I’m home. All the time, it was… We finally really did it.
    You Maniacs! You blew it up! Ah, damn you! God damn you all to hell!”

    • NickDA

      Googling reference…. ….

    • I know this one but can’t figure out from where… To google!!

      • ahhh, I meta-knew it. not from the original source

        • Adriano

          Only the two last lines ahah

          I first wanted to line it with today’s page.
          It’s my twisted sense of humour xD
          I totally see Jane falling on her knees saying that ^^

  • I like that the little trails of blood resemble the nanobot filaments. Very clever.
    I can’t decide if things have gotten better, or worse. I mean, she found him, but he’s not exactly riding the train to Saneville, either.

    • :looks again: Nice, @sebastinpriz:disqus! Did you do that on purpose? (I’m so lucky to have him on the team for awesome details like that. It wasn’t my idea, that’s for sure.)

  • Neil Kapit

    Ouch…that’s barely awake by any one’s definition.

  • Matt [in Middletown]

    Well, the nanobots fixed “all damage” to the brain, just..they made Tenzin central viewer of Closed Circuit BrainTV.

  • Michael Corley

    “Pool of blood” is a descriptor I hope never gets used for me!

    • Matt [in Middletown]

      “Convulsing in” said pool is also a further addition I hope to never experience.

      • Adriano

        Are you challenging me ?

        • Matt [in Middletown]

          Great, now I can imagine the nanobots actually saying that.
          And then making Tenzin do exactly that.

  • Dusty Coyote

    Lets go with alive. Awake would imply that this whole thing wasn’t necessary.

    • Depends on your definition of “awake”, really ;)

      • Dusty Coyote

        I suppose in a loss sense he’s not sleeping. So, he’s conscious, but not responding to external stimuli…

        Health is complicated.

      • Matt [in Middletown]

        Nanobot induced locked in syndrome, brought to you by Doc Kavi.
        And the letter D for dork.

  • theRoUS

    Awake, and apparently lying in a pool of blood. Well, ‘here’ anyway; not sure about the ‘awake’ part. Alive, obviously, or Jane would be having .. problems.

    “Jane! Don’t die in the Matrix!”

    What an ironic twist that would be.

    • NickDA

      brought to you by M.Night Shamalamadingdong! But she fixes it because of asthmatic water fetishes of unfulfilled sports affinity!

  • Ydo Ucare

    Out of curiosity, why does Jane have riveted holes in the back of her suit? Do they serve some purpose or is just some weird futuristic style?

    • It’s more that she is “wearing” the same plug suit that Tenzin and other soldiers wear under their armor. It plugs in and anchors the armor to the wearer.

  • Ow, man! Cool last panel, though!

  • Citrus Reaper

    Uh-Oh!

  • theRoUS

    “And he has all his parts, too!”