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Nov 2013

Chapter 1: Page 4 – Suiting Up

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While most of Chapters 1 – 3 focus on Tenzin as the main protagonist, you do get to meet some of the other main characters on the next couple of pages.  Rick and Viktor will both play very important roles in the story.

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15

Nov 2013

Chapter 1: Page 3 – Exercises

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Sorry for the hecka ton of words on this page.  I was still getting used to writing a comic instead of a novel.  It gets better.

EDIT:  I have since updated this page a bit, tightening up the dialogue and hopefully making it flow better, even if it is still a lot of words.

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14

Nov 2013

Chapter 1: Page 2 – Wake Up

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EDIT:  We went back and tightened up some of the dialogue on these pages, since we’d been losing a lot of traffic here and on the next page.  And since I’ve improved my writing and craft since we started this project 2 years ago ;)

Let us know what you think.

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