Chapter 1: Page 3 – Exercises
Sorry for the hecka ton of words on this page. I was still getting used to writing a comic instead of a novel. It gets better.
EDIT: I have since updated this page a bit, tightening up the dialogue and hopefully making it flow better, even if it is still a lot of words.
Chapter 1: Page 2 – Wake Up
EDIT: We went back and tightened up some of the dialogue on these pages, since we’d been losing a lot of traffic here and on the next page. And since I’ve improved my writing and craft since we started this project 2 years ago ;)
Let us know what you think.