I received some interesting feedback from reddit user deviantbono the other day about the amount of text on the first couple of pages. Essentially, he thought that there was a ton of text, making the pages too full and busy. This isn’t the first time I heard it (my wife said the same thing), but multiple people saying the same thing means I should really pay attention.
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Set in 22nd century Earth, over 100 years after the 3rd World War, the Demon Archives tells the survivors' stories as they struggle to rebuild civilization. In Book One, we'll meet the members of Minerva, one of the few high tech organizations that survived the War, and learn how they established a beacon of hope in the dreary wasteland of central Asia.
Minerva: Book One of the Demon Archives follows the story of Tenzin, a Minervan soldier, and his Oracle AI, Jane, as they fight to protect the ideals Minerva stands for in an increasingly chaotic world.
With a heavy basis in real science and technology with a healthy dallop of imagination, The Demon Archives will show you how life could be in a post-apocalyptic Earth.