• Tru’Barb

    I want to make some comment about how much this is starting to look like he’s been set up - but since I’ve got at least 2 months of archive to catch up on, making some remark that’s just going to get blown out of the water in a page or six would feel dumb.

    Sigh — must read faster….

    • Hehe. A big part of the story is Tenzin figuring out who and how this goes down. And by big part I mean chapters and chapters from now.

      • Adriano #WR

        How many chapters do you have ?

        • Seba is working on the last part of chapter 4 and starting chapter 5. I’ve got it all planned out to about chapter 10.

          • Adriano #WR

            Chapter 10 ?
            …
            I think I’m going to enjoy this story much more than expected :D

            Thank you for the answers o/

  • Demetri Ermak

    Especially since the other way around he could easily walk by a house where his men are being cornered without even knowing they were there.

  • Panel one is quality. Love it.

  • Citrus Reaper

    That’s some quality sci-fi cursewords right there.

    • Yeah I’m in a weird place between not swearing myself, and not wanting to use a lot of harsh curse words, and the realization that Tenzin and other “space marines” would totally swear up a storm. So mostly I’m using light swears, made up swears, and foreign language swears. Not a perfect fit, but it works for me.

      • Citrus Reaper

        I’m a hardcore Firefly Geek, so I am very much in favor of cursewords in foreign languages.

        • Firefly was a big inspiration for that for me :D

          • Citrus Reaper

            Whooo! Browncoats!