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Jan 2016

Chapter 9: Page 1 - Breathe In

Posted by / in Comic / 16 comments

Seba’s having an electricity problem at his home right now, and can’t get me the finished page. So I’m uploading the inks while we wait :) Check back later today for colors! EDIT: Now with colors!

Also, are there any science/engineering nerds who want to help crowdsource Minervan science that could become canon in-world and in-comic? Check out this forum thread where you can suggest improvements to weapons/armor/whatever, and if I like it, I’ll use it for the comic, and you can even help me write the character of the “researcher” who developed it for a potential in-comic cameo XD

Also also, check out the newest piece of music we’ve commissioned. “Reluctant Hero”, Tenzin’s theme song!

  • Dusty Coyote

    Jane: Tenzins own digital older sister.

    • Adriano

      After “INDIRAAAAAAAAA !”, come see the new movie by Tenzin : “JAAAAAAAAAAAAAANE !”

  • Honestly, It’s kind of cool seeing these pages without color. Don’t get me wrong, I love the colors in this comic, but it’s interesting seeing it with just the outlines. It still looks pretty good.

  • Adriano

    Damn, and I thought the b&w was on purpose xD
    It sure gives a strange and etheral atmosphere to this page, feeling like we’re inside the meditation of Tenzin…

    • Mark Linimon

      I thought it was on purpose as well. Stark.

  • Chris Kotthoff

    I vote to keep the first 4 panels black and white and just color the last.

    • Adriano

      I second that !

  • Ian Brown

    awww, sounds like we’re not getting a mecha tenzin, but a form of master chief tenzin. i’m kind of sad :(

    • For NOW ;)

      • Matt [in Middletown]

        Maybe after a few more limb losses.

  • Breathe in breathe out
    Breathe in breathe out
    Breathe in, breathe in, BREATHE IN

    GOT A MACHINE HEAD
    Better than the rest
    Green to red
    MACHINE HEAD

  • Chris Kotthoff

    Update: The colors look great! Awesome transition from gray scale to golden bronze

  • Taking214

    question: if tenzin still has a computer in his head, why is it that they can’t just plug the armor into it?

  • Hipopótamo

    Clenching his teeth? That was very funny. Jane has a very sly humor for an AI. C’mon Tenzin! Give the girl some control, would you?